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Efe-lata Duffy Assembly Recount

Duffy Assembly Recount

WALT: Write a recount with the right structure

WALT: Use interesting words to make your recount more exciting

Introduction: 3 sentences Hook What is the story going to be about Who, what, where, when, why

Melanie, Ashley, Duffy On Wednesday The 7th of Feb only Team 4 and 5 went  to watch the duffy show.And it was kinda alright but not  to bad.But I only like the halloween story And what I noticed  is  that the halloween story is the same as the school bullying  story cause ashley bullys Melani and the ghost bullys the skeletan.

Body: 3-4 sentences What happened first? How did we get the the assembly? Where did we sit?

So after lunch all of team 4 and 5 went into lines but in maths lines only. When we got to the hall we sat down and started to listen to the girls. That was introducing their names to all of team 4 and 5 but there was only 3 girls and their names are Melanie,Ashley the main  actor Duffy.Also only my class rm8 was at the front.

Body: 3-4 sentences What happened in the assembly? What was the Duffy assembly about?

They started a show on friday in the hall.The halloween bully.

Body:: 3-4 sentences What was your favourite part of the assembly? What do you think the main message was?

My favorite part of the show is the halloween bully .I just like it cause its just cool I liked the customs cause it looked pretty.

Conclusion: Two sentences What did you learn in the assembly? How did the assembly make you feel? One final sentence to sum up your recount

I learnt that bullying isn't good to do to other people.Because if you bully other people how would you fill.Cause I’ll fill pretty sad.

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences. Start your writing here:Melanie, Ashley, Duffy On Wednesday The 7th of Feb only Team 4 and 5 went  to watch the duffy show.And it was kinda alright but not  to bad.But I only like the halloween story And what I noticed  is  that the halloween story is the same as the school bullying  story cause ashley bullys Melani and the ghost bullys the skeletan.So after lunch all of team 4 and 5 went into lines but in maths lines only. When we got to the hall we sat down and started to listen to the girls. That was introducing their names to all of team 4 and 5 but there was only 3 girls and their names are Melanie,Ashley the main  actor Duffy.Also only my class rm8 was at the front.They started a show on friday in the hall.The halloween bully.My favorite part of the show is the halloween bully .I just like it cause its just cool I liked the customs cause it looked pretty.

I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
1	Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.	x
2	Recounts the experience in the order the events happened.	x
3	Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.	x
4	Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).	x
5	Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.	x

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Efe-lata About Me Writing 2018

Hi my name is Efe-lata  and I am a year 6 at pt england school.I have 3 teachers in rooms 6, 7 and  8 and their names are Miss Parrant,Miss Szymanik and Mr Goodwin. I enjoy spending time with my siblings and parents whenever we go to the beach we take cards and games. Also I enjoy  helping my parents with whatever they need. My favorite colour is blue. I used to play netball and we only lost 3 games and but we won 7 games well at least we all tried our best. I also  love camping well only with my church and I will be going next week on friday but I will also be staying for assembly then me and my family will be going to camp.This year my goal is to listen very hard to the teachers instructions.And help others if they are stuck on any activities