Recount Writing
Year 6 Camp
Walt: organise our ideas into a series of paragraphs.
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Kayaking
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Sailing
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Abseiling
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Burma Trail
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Bivouac
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Raft Building
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Confidence Course
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Orienteering
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Hiking
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Wharf
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Kawau
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Bentzon
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Mansion
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Katz
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Stingrays
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Bugle
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Princess Bride
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Spotlight
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Volleyball
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Hug your mumma
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Bush Baseball
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Weka
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Wallaby
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Pontoon
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Killer Hill
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Camp Concert
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Survivor Island
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Cabins
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Peter
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Erin
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Tina
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Chris
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Greg
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Tia
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Haare
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Egan
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TA
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Shannon
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Timmi
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Maddie
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Tuesday 2oth November 2018 - Friday 23rd November 2018
Introduction: (2-3 sentences)
Who? What? When? Where?
Make it exciting for your audience to read!
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So It was Tuesday and I did not want to leave my family especially my mum.I didn’t want to go because I thought that I would fail walking up the “KILLER-HILL”.When we got to sand spit on the bus we had to get all get the bags out one by one.When we had finished getting out the bags like suitcases and bags we all got to sit down and have somethings to eat before we get a move on.Then after we ate we all had to walk and wait to hop onto the ferri.We got to sit at the top of the ferri.
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Paragraph 1: (3-4 sentences)
What happened first? Getting to Camp what was the first thing you did? Hike?
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When everyone got to the island which is called KAUWAU ISLAND.Everybody had to take the boxes of food also bags and suitcases.When every single bag was out we had to line the bags and suitcases in a row after taking the bags and things out of the ferri we had to meet all together on the grass where the park and swing + VOLLEYBALL COURT.After the teachers talking to us we got to walk up killer hill it was tiring and scary because when we were climbing up the hill it took for ages it makes me feel like just jumping of the hill or just rolling off.
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Paragraph 2: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next? Day two activities what activities did you do?
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It is now Wednesday I am in kats for camp.My Group is doing the BURMA activite.It was fun because i got to lead madison and it was funny because i was tickling her with sticks and silver ferns and it was scary and funny at the same time cause she slipped.
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Paragraph 3: (3-4 sentences)
What happened next? Day three activities what did you do?
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Then on thursday it as kind of the last day for camp I was so happy to go back home because I missed my family alot.So When everyone woke up we had breakfast then we all had to brush and wash our faces.After doing all those thing we moved on to doing our next first activite.
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Thankyou: (2-3 sentences)
Thank you peter and Erin for letting us stay over at your island for four days and also for the teachers for being helpful .
I ENJOYED KAYAKING and jumping of the grey platform.Who would you like to thank for helping you at camp?
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Thank you peter and Erin for letting us stay over at your island for four days and also for the teachers for being helpful .
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Conclusion:: (2-3 sentences)
What did you enjoy? What did you learn?
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I ENJOYED KAYAKING and jumping of the grey platform.
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Your recount - in full sentences - start here:
So It was Tuesday and I did not want to leave my family especially my mum.I didn’t want to go because I thought that I would fail walking up the “KILLER-HILL”.When we got to sand spit on the bus we had to get all get the bags out one by one.When we had finished getting out the bags like suitcases and bags we all got to sit down and have somethings to eat before we get a move on.Then after we ate we all had to walk and wait to hop onto the ferri.We got to sit at the top of the ferri.
When everyone got to the island which is called KAUWAU ISLAND.Everybody had to take the boxes of food also bags and suitcases.When every single bag was out we had to line the bags and suitcases in a row after taking the bags and things out of the ferri we had to meet all together on the grass where the park and swing + VOLLEYBALL COURT.After the teachers talking to us we got to walk up killer hill it was tiring and scary because when we were climbing up the hill it took for ages it makes me feel like just jumping of the hill or just rolling
of the hill
It is now Wednesday I am in Kats for camp.My Group is doing the BURMA activite. It was fun because i got to lead madison and it was funny because i was tickling her with sticks and silver ferns and it was scary and funny at the same time cause she slipped.
Then on Thursday it as kind of the last day for camp I was so happy to go back home because I missed my family alot.So When everyone woke up we had breakfast then we all had to brush and wash our faces.After doing all those thing we moved on to doing our next first activite.
