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Wednesday, 18 September 2019

Explanation template

















explanation template

Explanation template
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Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Be clever! Hook your reader
3 ways to being responsible.
Introduction
Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.
Let us not seek the Republican answer or the Democratic answer, but the right answer. Let us not seek to fix the blame for the past. Let us accept our own responsibility for the future. - John F. Kennedy
Information
1st element
Idea 1
Being responsible means by taking care of your own belongings. That if you give any of your things to others to look after and if they lose they will have to take the blame for losing your belongings.
Information
2nd element
Idea 2
Also tips for being responsible and for not losing your things could be like . When you label your things so that you wouldn't have to lose it ever again because of how you labeled it . And you also wouldn’t have to give your things to others to look after and then they won’t have to be blamed for losing your belongings that you gave to them to look after.
Information
3rd element
Idea 3
Also another way to being responsible is  by not having to rely on your parents to look after your belongings for you and also not for others to look after your belongings for you .They also won’t be blamed or annoyed by getting blamed for losing your belongings.
Conclusion
There you have it - 4 reasons as to
-why
-that will help you
-for you to try...
Being responsible means by looking after your own things and not having to rely on others to look after it for you. My thoughts on responsibility is not having others to look after your things for you especially your parents because your parents have a lot to take responsible for in life.





Thursday, 5 September 2019

Explanation Writing


This is my Explanation Writing that I wrote about and learnt about in class for writing .

Wednesday, 4 September 2019

Dinghy!!!

Sentence from story: A special flying boat was packed on board the yacht.


My sentence and thinking: My thoughts of a dinghy is an inflatable flying boat..


Dinghy create task!!   

Dinghy
Fish
Inflatable,Blow it up,floaty,inner tube-doughnut,
Seacretures and seaweed
Coral reef / and water!.
Ding dongs and ocean water!



Thursday, 15 August 2019

Thursday, 8 August 2019

Persuasive writing

Hook:     
Have you heard ever heard of persuasive well I can tell you something.


Good reason:
I think that school should start earlier and end later because you can have more time at school with your friends and also that you can finish off things that you haven't done.

Finish early/Finish late: I reckon kids should end late because they should learn their math,writing and reading. So when they get older they could go somewhere and all they will see is writing.


Best reason:
I think that school should end later because it is more time to do work and that you can learn more to get a good education when you grow up to build a better future
For you and your family.

School : School is where kids should learn how to read and also they should learn their maths because wherever the go they will see numbers and words like the road directions that  shows they where to go and it gives them clues to how to get to their direction to where their going .


 Finishing off work : Finishing off your work at school is important because you could get a better education and a better life and a better future for you and your family. Finishing of your work is important because you could get better  at doing your work and you also could start finishing of your work a lot more. Also finishing of your work could help you find you a work in the future and you could  also help your parents with things their stuck with .