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Thursday 18 August 2016

Never give up

Derek Redmond's Is a runner and he is about to do are running race. Also I think that he feels strong that he will win the race.He done the olympics in 1992 and he is from Britain that also means that  he he British.






Derek ran half way and then stopped and broke his hamstring.He felt very disappointed that he didn’t  finish his running.He looked like he disappointed his dad and his country.




After derek hurt his hamstring his father ran up to him and help him up to the finish line.Then people walked up and tried to help but his dad pushed them away and he said that he will hop with him until they reach the finish line.


3 comments:

  1. Wow! I like the great writing i just finsh reading it nice pic to efelata and nice speach bubles bye

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  2. Hi Efe-lata I love your writing and pic with the speech bubbles.Next time when you post make sure that is makes sense and that you use captal letters for Olympics.Keep up the great work.

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  3. Hi Efe-lata I love your writing and pic with the speech bubbles.Next time when you post make sure that is makes sense and that you use captal letters for Olympics.Keep up the great work.

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