Derek ran half way and then stopped and broke his hamstring.He felt very disappointed that he didn’t finish his running.He looked like he disappointed his dad and his country.
After derek hurt his hamstring his father ran up to him and help him up to the finish line.Then people walked up and tried to help but his dad pushed them away and he said that he will hop with him until they reach the finish line.
Wow! I like the great writing i just finsh reading it nice pic to efelata and nice speach bubles bye
ReplyDeleteHi Efe-lata I love your writing and pic with the speech bubbles.Next time when you post make sure that is makes sense and that you use captal letters for Olympics.Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Efe-lata I love your writing and pic with the speech bubbles.Next time when you post make sure that is makes sense and that you use captal letters for Olympics.Keep up the great work.
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