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Tracking My Learning Part 2 Term 4


What is DNA? . DNA is something that is in every human on this earth . DNA is located in the cell nuleus.

How to be a good daughter 2k19

How to be a good son/daughter
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
How to be a good daughter?
Introduction



Being a good daughter or older sister/daughter means to take responsibility for your things. Taking care of your things means a lot of things. Here is my writing about how to be a good daughter.


Information
1st element
Good daughter means helping out with whatever your parents want. Helping your parents is the first thing you should always do - for example helping to look after your parents with what they need is important. Because when you get older your parents might not be there for you anymore or they might...
Information
2nd element
Being a good sister also means setting an example of looking after the younger toddlers as in others around you. Eating on top of your elder's head can be disrespectful - Example take your food and sit on the ground if there are no chairs on the table for you to fit or to sit on. Setting a good example is also me meaning as in being a leader and respect others around you.



Information
3rd element
Good daughter also means helping out around the house to know what to do when you grow up and have kids. Example - Helping around the house is a good thing. Because being spoiled and sitting around ain't gonna help you with anything either when you are grown or when you have kids.
Conclusion

Being a good daughter is a good thing because you are always getting to move around doing chores anywhere and everywhere you go no matter where you go or where you are at those times.



Keyhole Narritive


Start writing here:

Keyhole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.

One day Jenna , Kaiah , Jen , and Rina went for a girls road trip . Rina crashed into a tree we’ll she was driving and all the girls were dizzy . They ended up in a cave  laying down on the concrete. The next day they woke up so shocked to see a flying Boat that was a piece that came out of the top of the mountain. They all didn’t know what to do because they were still in shock . Only because they have never seen a flying boat ever in their lives. They ended up not knowing how to get back home . But luckily RInas car was there too so they started to drive but then they ran out of gas . They started to walk back to the cave and just laid down on the concrete where they were . Because Jen thought that if they went back to lay down where they first were they would end up back at home . But it didn’t even work until… The next morning the flying boat disappeared and jen went to push a rubber brick in the cave and a secret door opened once the door opened they entered through the door and they all walked in and saw another door they opened the door and ended up back in the car when they first crashed into a tree and ended up in the hospital with all their other friends and parents. After 2 weeks they got out of the hospital and they wanted to go on another girls road trip neck minute they ended up in the same situation and they lived happily ever after.


The End.


This is my Narrative planning that I will be posting after im done writing.