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One night a girl named Nelly went for a walk during the night. Things started getting awkward during her walk. She started getting worried so she decided to turn back and walk home. As she was walking home she looked back and she was in shock to see someone following her so she ran and the stranger was still going after her. She ran and hid at a dead end behind a big rubbish bin and she got caught. The stranger took her home and tied her up to a chair and started asking her questions that had nothing to do with her…

 Mysterious stranger “Hello Kelly”...Nelly replied “I’m not Kelly I’m Nelly” ....The mysterious stranger replied “I know  you're playing around with me so quit playing”...Nelly replied “ I’m so confused I don’t even know why i’m here”... The mysterious turned on the light to check if it actually wasn’t Kelly. As he turned it on he was in shock and embarrassed to see who he actually got. He started apologizing telling her she's really sorry Nelly said “ it’s okay but why do you want my sister”?... He replied “only because she did something that wasn’t right”.. Nelly said “what did she do”??... He said “she decided to rob a shop” Nelly wasn’t happy with what she heard so she told him to leave it to her because only she can handle her sister.  Nelly asked him what his name was and he said his name was Eric…



Eric said “He’ll give her one chance but if she doesn’t talk to her sister he’ll have to report her to the police” Nelly said “don’t worry i’ll do it” Eric said “okay” and Nelly went home to go look if her sister was at home… When she saw Kelly she went to sit down to talk with Kelly and Nelly told Kelly everything and Kelly was apologizing telling her shes really sorry for putting her in a very bad situation that had nothing to do with her. Nelly said “its okay i’ll help you” Kelly said “thanks Nelly” so they both decided that they’ll do everything in the morning once they get up tomorrow morning.


Next day - Nelly and Kelly went to the shop. They hopped off and walked into the shop and started to say sorry and Kelly decided to give him some money to show him that she was really sorry the shop keeper said “It’s okay just don’t do it again please”.. She said okay and as they left they decided to have a sisters day out to celebrate something that they fixed together so as they went on they were really really really happy.

 To be continued…..

Anzac Poster

The first Anzac Day was back in 1915.The landing at the Anzac Cove was on Sunday the 25th of April. Also known as the landing at Gaba Tepe, and to the turks as the Ariburnu Battle. This is my poster I decided to do about Anzac Day. First me and my older cousin (Veni) drew the pictures first then I got to colour it all in with a few more tips from my cousin. This was the only thing I could think about doing for Anzac Day because I couldn't find anything else.

Clowning Around

This is my slide work for clowning around and  also my poster.

Week 4 Tivaevae

WALT: Ask questions about what we are learning to gain a deeper understanding of the text.
WALT: Use information in the text to support our understanding of unknown words phrases

Task description: This week my reading group ( OYSTERS) done a create task about a Cook Island  theme called Tivaevae, This is my tivaevae video and Kingstons we did . Some of the words were really hard to pronounce like tivaevae tauri'i. We also read a poem called My Mother's Coat and learnt about personification. This is my vlog and Kingstons about our Tivaevae task hope you enjoy.

What it means to be a role model

What it means to be a good role model. Are you a good role model, do you show support, encourage & show respect to other people? In this explanation writing I am going to be explaining the reasons of what a good role model is & how a good role model sounds and acts.

Good role models are the types of people who encourage, motivate and respect other people. Good role models encourage others to never ever give up, they motivate people to strive and succeed, respect their peers and treat others the way they want to be treated. For example one of my role models is my mama. My mama has always encouraged and motivated me throughout my life at school. My mama has always encouraged me and told me that I should never give up with the things I do and achieve.

To me being a good role model is someone who is positive all the way, confident with all things in life and someone who is bubbly and funny. Role models are people who are positive, being positive is a big thing in being a role model. Being a role model you have to be confident and face the challenges in life. You may not always be happy with the things you do but it’s best to be positive all the time. My mother is another role model of mine because she is very confident with the things she does, she is positive most of the time and always shows happiness towards others.

A role model is someone who is hard-working, mature and self-talkative. Most of my role models are very hard-working and powerful women. They are very strong and mature and have  believed in themselves all the way. My last two role models would have to be my teachers Mrs Ilaoa and Mrs Sio. The reasons why they are my two role models are because they are very hard-working. They work hard, never give up and always try to teach us new things at school. Our class can be a handful or more sometimes but my two role model teachers are always strong and push us until we succeed.

So now that you’ve read my story about “Role Models” are you strong, powerful and motivational enough to be a good role model? Everyone has the strength to be a role model. So use your strength and become a better role model then you already are!

My Prior of Persuasive Writing

This is my Prior of persuasive writing for  2019 . 

Vaka Voyagers

Tukis Map

First world war mascots